To Carefully Split the Infinitive
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Adjustments
would permit "to boldly go", and Shakespeare could have said
"To be, or to not be."
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17 Feb 2003
The infinitive is formed by a verb and "to", as in "I
need to go."
A split infinitive occurs when words or punctuation are inserted between
"to" and the verb.
Example: "I need to immediately start my project."
The best-known split infinitive of the last thirty years is "To boldly
go..." from Star Trek. The phrase seems perfectly clear, so what's wrong
with it?
Possibly nothing, according to many modern references on English grammar. One
claim is that since Latin infinitives couldnt be split ("to love"
is "amare"), it was arbitrarily decided that one mustn't split them
in English.
I don't completely agree. Following the above logic, it can also be said that
most languages can't split infinitives, therefore they obviously don't need
to split infinitives, so why do we need to do so in English?
However, a better reason to avoid splitting infinitives is to maintain clear
sentence structure.
Example: "It would be prudent to carefully, so as to not appear
eager, proceed in this action."
Can you even find the infinitive "to proceed"?
Because many authorities seem to
be making up their own rules, I'll offer some rules which I believe preserve
the logic of syntax:
Suggestion 1: Treat negation and adverb modification as verbs. E.g.,
if not go and quickly go were verbs, then "to not
go" and "to quickly go" would be legitimate infinitives.
Suggestion 2: Now that we have broadened the set of infinitives, avoid
splitting them, particularly with punctuation.
These adjustments would permit "to boldly go", and Shakespeare could have said "To be or to not be", but awkward constructions such as to quietly, so as to avoid notice, enter would be prevented.
- Andrew Hadley
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